Comments on: Another 5 Mistakes That Kill Your Sales http://rayedwards.com/another-5-mistakes-that-kill-your-sales/?utm_source=rss&utm_medium=rss&utm_campaign=another-5-mistakes-that-kill-your-sales Copywriting, Marketing, and Spiritual Dimensions of Business Wed, 08 Feb 2012 16:30:39 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 By: JEFF WELLS http://rayedwards.com/another-5-mistakes-that-kill-your-sales/comment-page-1/#comment-1866 JEFF WELLS Mon, 10 Dec 2007 05:54:48 +0000 http://rayedwards.com/?p=6#comment-1866 Don't put the price before the offer. I'm going to watch out for that one. I'll try to be sure and lay out the benifets of the offer before revealing price. Don’t put the price before the offer.
I’m going to watch out for that one.
I’ll try to be sure and lay out the benifets of the offer before revealing price.

]]> By: Ray Edwards http://rayedwards.com/another-5-mistakes-that-kill-your-sales/comment-page-1/#comment-3 Ray Edwards Wed, 14 Feb 2007 20:51:20 +0000 http://rayedwards.com/?p=6#comment-3 Thanks for the heads-up, Kent. I fixed it - and left the evidence in the post! :-) Thanks for the heads-up, Kent. I fixed it – and left the evidence in the post!
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]]> By: Kent Davis http://rayedwards.com/another-5-mistakes-that-kill-your-sales/comment-page-1/#comment-2 Kent Davis Mon, 05 Feb 2007 15:21:31 +0000 http://rayedwards.com/?p=6#comment-2 I guess number 6.5 would be good grammar. Something does not read right in this point. Deadly Mistake #6: Sentences and Paragraphs That Are Too Long "People will read more of your copy if the sentences are paragraphs are short." Too many "are" in that sentence. But not withstanding your bad grammar, I still wish I could write copy a tenth as good as you do. I enjoy the newsletter and try to learn from what you share. Good Day, Kent Davis I guess number 6.5 would be good grammar. Something does not read right in this point.
Deadly Mistake #6: Sentences and Paragraphs That Are Too Long
“People will read more of your copy if the sentences are paragraphs are short.”

Too many “are” in that sentence. But not withstanding your bad grammar, I still wish I could write copy a tenth as good as you do. I enjoy the newsletter and try to learn from what you share.

Good Day,
Kent Davis

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