Comments on: Hemingway On Copywriting

By: Brendan

Brendan — Thu, 12 Jun 2008 07:32:43 +0000

Unfortunately for the many masses who think his word scripture, so-called “Papa” was not a brilliant writer, but kind of a very good one. He could not bring you to the elevations of Joyce or Woolf or Mann or Kafka or Pynchon or Vollmann or Melville, or even really Steinbeck. Unfortunately for certain people, it takes a slight bit more work than “short sentences” and “subtext” to get the most out of literature, and out of life.

By: Ed Erickson

Ed Erickson — Sun, 09 Dec 2007 20:17:43 +0000

er, that quote is not from Johnson’s post. That was actually my closing comment. Not sure how I managed to make it a “quote.”

Brian’s TeachingSells course however, is excellent! Especially is your thinking of creating a continuing education membership site with a multimedia focus.

By: Ed Erickson

Ed Erickson — Sun, 09 Dec 2007 03:36:54 +0000

Boy and this sure is still validated today. Commented on another post re this but it’s awaiting moderation so I’ll just repost it here…

You know this even applies to the trend in book sales, even in the business catagory where you’d expect mature readers with older school attention spans. Check out this blog post by Steve Berlin Johnson http://www.stevenberlinjohnson.com/2007/10/this-may-be-old.html.

Brian’s blog rocks btw. Going thru his TeachingSells course right now as well. It’s very interesting, esp in the context of the attention age doctrine.

By: JEFF WELLS

JEFF WELLS — Sun, 09 Dec 2007 02:12:55 +0000

I have seen the six toed cats and chickens descendants of his pets in Key West.

Even if I were to imbibe in absinthe till I saw roses growing from the floor, I will never be able to write like Hemingway.

But, I can learn and try.

By: Tim Adams

Tim Adams — Tue, 04 Dec 2007 18:11:32 +0000

Short paragraphs is critical to make it look inviting to the reader.

Longer paragraphs are intimidating.

I compare it to chapters in a book.

Let’s say I’m reading a book and get to the end of a chapter and the next chapter has 30 pages. I’m mpre likely to hold off and not get started because the chapter is so long.

If the chapter is only 7-8 pages, I’ll probably go ahead and go for it.

And then I do the same thing with the next short chapter.

In the end, I may end up reading the same 30+ pages, but I wasn’t overwhelmed by it since I did it in smaller 7-8 page chunks.

Look at your copy the same way. Get them to eat that long copy sales letter elephant one bite at a time.

By: Criss Bertling

Criss Bertling — Mon, 03 Dec 2007 03:48:58 +0000

Hemingway was a brilliant communicator with his words. According to several sources, including Wikipedia: “In the 1920s, Hemingway bet his colleagues $10 that he could write a complete story in just six words. They paid up. His story: ‘For sale. Baby shoes. Never worn.’”

That says it it all, doesn’t it?

Criss

By: Eldo Barkhuizen

Eldo Barkhuizen — Fri, 02 Nov 2007 18:00:22 +0000

Ray

Thanks for these nuggets!

George Orwell, in his 1946 essay “Politics and the English Language”, said something similar:

1. Never use a metaphor, simile, or other figure of speech which you are used to seeing in print.
2. Never use a long word where a short one will do.
3. If it is possible to cut a word out, always cut it out.
4. Never use the passive where you can use the active.
5. Never use a foreign phrase, a scientific word, or a jargon word if you can think of an everyday English equivalent.
6. Break any of these rules sooner than saying anything outright barbarous.

All the best,

Eldo